Eemeli Perttunen

Field trip
I liked your text. You proved your points well and really tried to convince the teacher that you want to go on a trip. In my opinion I think the text was solid

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Susanna Kaan

I agree! The only thing I noticed missing was the line adressing the teacher (Dear Ms./Mrs./Mr. Teacher)

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