Field trip

Can we please go on field trip? 

 

Teacher please can we go on a field trip, we would really want to and in my opinion, we deserve it. I will do more homework if you take us on a trip. And I mean that, I am ready to do extra assignments for this. 

We would like the trip to be somewhere quite far away where we would have to spend the night. We could even spend the night in tents if that’s what the school can afford. We also need some free time to go shopping and experience new activities.  

For example, Sweden or Norway could be cool to visit, because of the scenery and landscapes. But if you ask me, it would be nice to stay somewhere closer to a city. I hope that you can make this possible and take us somewhere far away. 

Love: Konsta and Henrik 

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Eemeli Perttunen

I liked your text. You proved your points well and really tried to convince the teacher that you want to go on a trip. In my opinion I think the text was solid
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Susanna Kaan

I agree! The only thing I noticed missing was the line adressing the teacher (Dear Ms./Mrs./Mr. Teacher)
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