MIETI MIKÄ KUULOSTAA PUHEKIELISELTÄ/EPÄSOPIVALTA KIRJEESSÄ. KIRJOITA NE ERIKSEEN JA KEKSI NIILLE VIRALLISEMPI/SOPIVAMPI MUOTO. Voit etsiä apua ena6 kurssin kirjoitelman ohjeesta: (löytyy Kirjoitelma/Composition -sivulta), ja siitä erityisesti kohta miten aloitetaan sekä lopetetaan virallinen/ei virallinen kirje.

Register Clash

Your friend asks your help in making their application letter more formal. Find the words and expressions that clash with the overall style and replace them with their more formal synonyms. There are seven register clashes in the letter. (14 p.)



Dear Mr Joyce

I am writing to enquire about the Marketing Assistant job advertised in the Helsingin Sanomat of 10 March.

I have had a lot of opportunities to get new skills in marketing in my present position as a Marketing Assistant with OfficeStars Ltd. I am also kind of familiar with sales and exports. Anyway, I am always searching for new challenges.

Thank you for considering my application. I am available for an interview when it’s okay with you.

Best,

Matt Dawkins