Sam and Tree vs Ariana

Once upon a time lived a boy called Sam. He lived with her sister. Her name was  Ariana. Ariana is two years older to Sam.
Their parents died when sam was 15 and  Ariana was 17. Sam was very naughty. He sometimes didn´t listen to Ariana. Ariana sometimes used to shout at him when he did something naughty. Ariana was very nice, helpful, intelligent girl and used to take good care of Sam. Every night Ariana used to tell him a story about a swan who used to help others. Sam used to ask Ariana everyday that how did our parents died and every time Ariana used to say that you are too young to understand. But when Sam insisted, Ariana agreed to tell him the truth. She told him that their parents died because of magical tree in forest.
Sam was in shock to hear about this.

"It is not possible because the tree is my best friend,'' said Sam.
 "This is the reality and if you don't believe me, let's go and ask the tree," said Ariana.
They started to walk towards the tree who was hearing their conversation. Tree said to himself that he will not say truth to Sam.
"Where are you tree, my friend," asked Sam.
 "I am here and what is the matter?'' said the Tree
Sam told the tree that his sister is saying their parents had died because of you magical tree. But tree denied this and told Sam that his parents died because of Ariana. 
"The tree is lying", said Ariana.
Magical tree said I even have a video that show about you´r parents and how they died.

When the tree showed the video Sam was in a shock. It showed that Ariana was the person who killed. Tree said that let's go out and say to Ariana. Sam why are you looking so mad.Because you lied to me and I hate you because of you our parents died.
''Ariana (in shock) that is not true the tree is trying to save himself.''
 "It is not the truth".
 "I am going away because I don't want to stay with you Ariana,'' shouted Sam.
"No wait" shouted Ariana!''





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Why do you have these christmas trees in your text?
There is a lot of speech in this story.Maybe there should be something else not just dialogue.

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